Wednesday, July 28, 2010

Basic Grammar help. 10 points for the best advice. Thank you?

I want to ';title'; my artifacts/work samples on my portfolio. Please help correct the grammar or rename it for me. English is my second language. Thank you very much.








Project 1





UNDERGRADUATE BUSINESS PROGRAMS COMPARISON PRESENT BY HOPE SMITH





Project 2





Review and Performance Analysis of the Housing Opportunities for Persons with AIDS (HOPWA) Program as


Administered through the U.S. Department of Housing and Urban Development Present By Hope Smith





Project 3





MBA Program Admission Record Present By Hope Amith





Project 4





Fall 2006 Schedule of Class Present By Hope SmithBasic Grammar help. 10 points for the best advice. Thank you?
Project 1





A Comparison of Undergraduate Business Programs - Presented by Hope Smith





Project 2





Review and Performance Analysis of Housing Opportunities for Persons with AIDS (HOPWA) Program; as administered through the U.S. Department of Housing and Urban Development - Presented by Hope Smith





Project 3





MBA Program Admission Records - Presented by Hope Smith





Project 4





Class Schedule of Fall 2006 - Presented by Hope Smith





Hope this helps!Basic Grammar help. 10 points for the best advice. Thank you?
You understand and write English language. The only change I would make is to use a different form of the word present. I would use presented instead of present.





Good luck and God bless you!
WE'VE BEEN THROUGH THIS ALREADY,DO IT THE BEST TO YOUR ABILITY THATS ALL YOU CAN DO ,NOBODY IS PERFECT
I think this present by is wrong, it should be


presented by: Hope Smith
There's nothing to be corrected, they are all fine.
Looks good Hope. Your getting better.
its perfect

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