Mature and educated marriage people. 10 points for the best advice. Thank you?

I AM APPLYING FOR JOBS. MOST JOBS REQUIRE WRITING SAMPLES. WHAT DO YOU THINK OF MINE?


PLEASE ADVICE. THANK YOU VERY MUCH.





Introduction


The Housing Opportunities for Persons with AIDS (HOPWA) Program was the first program of its kind that was established to address the growing needs for housing for homeless and low-income individuals, as well as families that have been affected by the HIV/AIDS Virus (HUD, 2003). The significance of this study is to show the extent to which the HOPWA Program has in fact fulfilled its mandate by Congress to provide assistance to families, homeless persons and low-income persons living with HIV/AIDS.








Review of Literature


HOPWA Program was designed to provide housing assistance as the annual output measure; and to collect client information demonstrating the outcome for improved housing stability for the special needs population (HUD, 2003). In addition, HOPWA also makes grants to local communities, states, and nonprofit organizations to provide housing assistance and support services to low-income population with HIV/AIDS and their families (HUD, 2006). The funding request for the program is need-driven and reflects the department mission for providing permanent housing assistance to the populations who has very low-income and living with symptomatic HIV/AIDS, who also face chronic homelessness and other challenges (Kingsley, 2007).





Studies show over 90 percent of HOPWA funds are distributed according to the number of people living with HIV/AIDS within a state or community (Ramirez, 2006). HOPWA funding is integrated into the overall federal response to the population living with HIV/AIDS (Swindell, 2007). Recently, HUD united with the Department of Health and Human Services (HHS) and other federal agencies on a range of projects to promote better housing, health care, and other support services to those individuals living with HIV/AIDS (Saul, 2007).





Results


The U.S. federal government has made available over $2.3 billion in HOPWA budgets to support communities to establish and operate HIV/AIDS housing (Bruce, 2001). The U.S. Department of Housing and Urban Development provided $294.75 million to HIV/AIDS housing assistance program (HUD, 2006). The following chart indicates HOPWA budget for the period 2005-2007:


HOPWA Budget for the period 2005-2007 (Graph)











According to the chart, the 2005 budget requested for HOPWA was $294.8 million, which was level with the fiscal year 2004 (HUD, 2006). In 2006, HOPWA budget decreased to $286 million. In 2007, the program seeks $300 million (HUD, 2007).











Summary of Findings and Implications


Findings state that if the HOPWA program were to stay within budget, there would be a significant decrease in many of the services that the program offers such as housing assistance and medical care for people with HIV/AIDS. The following table describes the performance measurement system and how the system will be implemented.


HOPWA Program Performance Report (Data)





In conclusion, the HIV/AIDS cases are increasing faster than assistance can be given to the people. The findings show that even though HOPWA is not staying within


budget, they are still being effective not only to the people living with HIV/AIDS but other communities as well. The future of the HIV/AIDS community is greatly impacted by the amount of money that HOPWA receives in funds.Mature and educated marriage people. 10 points for the best advice. Thank you?
I think it is a very informative piece. I would just say add some graphics such as pie charts to your sample if you are allowed to, just so you can ';WOW'; the person who will be reading your writing sample. When people have to look at a bunch of samples all day to choose the best candidate, they are looking for something that is standing out from the rest...because anybody can write a bunch of information, but they key is to have that information to POP out at the reader...


Good luck with your Job search..Mature and educated marriage people. 10 points for the best advice. Thank you?
Why only married educated people?





For one thing, your very first sentence in the introduction is way too long. And secondly, the words ';in conclusion'; need to go. I didn't read much after that.





Why did you put this in Marriage and Divorce instead of homework or other category?
Very well writen ...sounds very intelligent ...I have to admit though ..I only made it through a few paragraphs .....





My question back to you is ...why the heck did i have to be married to answer this ...there are very educated single people out there too !!!!
Well, first of all, in your sub-text under the heading, you need to spell ';advice'; as ';advise';. You're not asking for ';advice';, but you want us to ';please advise';!!
You made me waste 45 seconds of my life. Thnks





By the way it is very good but it sounds like you are tying to look smarter than what you are.
Really good, sounds intelligient*
why are you asking us for advise? you have your subject matter down pat, now summarize the whole thing in 25 words or less, good luck on your project/essay
Why do I have to be married to answer this question?
I work in this field and am aware of the topic. I am sorry but it does not flow correctly. Example: First sentence.


The Housing Opportunities for Persons with AIDS (HOPWA) Program was the first of its kind. It was established to address the growing needs for housing requirements for homeless and low-income individuals and families that were affected by the HIV/AIDS Virus (HUD, 2003).
it is very well written, i would advise adding a few powerwords and vivid verbs to make it not so wordy with words such as; was, as, that ect. and i would use a different variety of transitions. instead of ';in conclusion'; try something like '; in final analysis';:}..good luck!